Great Start

Great Start

Looks like a good start so far, but I encourage you to be more specific with your points. I am really interested in your topic, and hope the final draft expands more on the topics you have introduced. Additionally, I would suggest adding flow throughout the transitions on your site. It is a little bit choppy as it jumps from Peer Relationships to Substance Abuse. The addition of headings/sub-headings could be beneficial for readers. Also, references!! Great work! Krysten

KrystenLindquist (talk)17:14, 25 July 2019