Your Introduction

Your Introduction

Hi!

Really interesting topic you chose to take a look at! It is definitely one that would be considered relevant information to know, especially today with women's rights being so up in the air.

As I was reading through your contribution, I was a little concerned with your choice of wording in your introduction. You have chosen to use "killing" and "kill" when describing the procedure of an abortion. I wonder if you would be able to find a less controversial term to use? I also noticed that you use "infants" as the term to describe the fetus that is being aborted. By definition, the term "infant" is used to describe a child after birth, while the term "fetus" is used to describe the child before birth. These changes could help give your page and information some scientific weight.

KathrynWalker (talk)01:39, 28 November 2018