Definitions

Hi! Great job on explaining some of the terms that may be unfamiliar to readers. An aspect that could be changed would perhaps be the first sentence of your definition of sterilization. Although this type of sentence may be helpful to have in an essay, it does not serve its purpose in increasing readers' understanding on what this word means. I think that this is an incredibly interesting topic that could be a shocking and enlightening read. Good luck and good job so far!