Synthesis

Hi,

I think that this piece highlights an important aspect and topic around immigrant women. The statistics and citations are there and it is presented in a non-bias way that is widely accepted and expected as one of the fundamental pillars of a wiki. My suggestion is although you need to stay non-bias throughout your piece, it lacks synthesis of the facts and evidences to what is being seen in society. There needs to be some kind of linkage between the facts and your topic. Perhaps a bit of explanation, or additional research may be needed.