Grammar/Spelling

Hi there,

I really like this topic, it hits close to home, so I truly enjoyed reading it. I like the way you broke up our topics as it was very clear and concise! I know that this is a draft, which is probably why you didn't notice any small grammatical errors. So, my only comment is to remember to proof read before you submit your final copy, because there were very small mistakes that you may miss. Other than that I really enjoyed reading your wiki page. :)