Discussion on Employment of Immigrant Women in Canada

Hello!

One of the first suggestions I would make would be to double check on grammar and punctuation. It would also be great to see the difference in employment between immigrant women and immigrant men in Canada, since you talked about how male immigrants still earn more than women immigrants. You could possibly go in depth and give examples, comparing immigrant women and their employment in Canada with other developed countries (like the United States). You could also possibly comparatively discuss the employment of immigrant women in different provinces as well, since there are different levels of standard of living in each area. Overall, I think that this is a great topic as I resonate with some of the research you have talked about. Thanks!