Peer feedback - Good job!
Fragment of a discussion from Talk:Dress Codes in Schools
Hi! I really enjoyed the content on your page, I found it extremely interesting and informative. I myself went to a school with a uniform and personally found it to be a beneficial to my learning with less focus on who was showing up with what cool new outfits and more on our actual education. I also see the benefit of self expression and how that helps people find their own individuality, coming into my first year of university i did actually have quite a difficult time of expressing my own style since I had always just worn a uniform. The issues arising with dress codes in school our quite sad and create even bigger gender barriers. The idea the male students feel too distracted when they see a young women wearing a tank top is quite disgusting. We should teach our sons not too think like that instead of raising women up to believe they shouldn't be allowed to do what they want with there body!
For my few suggestions I would say maybe add some photos and make it more engaging to the audience! other then that you're doing a great job and I really enjoyed learning more about this specific topic.
SiobhanParry (talk)