Images, and References

I like your incorporation of the topic of pink awareness and pink washing. You might have not added them yet, but I think it could use a little more images, perhaps some statistics and graphs or charts to show just how commercialized it is. Perhaps use some Canadian examples as well, such as the Canadian Cancer Society, and other groups and see what they are doing about breast cancer, or how the community is raising awareness for this.

Also, remember to include proper references at the bottom later on (I'm not sure if you just put those there so you can go back to it later).

Good luck!