Good page! A few suggestions.

Hi! I like your use of graphs and tables to organize your information, it is very clear for the reader to understand! I especially enjoyed the section depicting the differences in ages of marriage and births in recent years compared with before. I think something you could work on expanding would be on the term "Career Woman" and also to mention how the later age of marriages in recent years is related to more women becoming career-oriented rather than family-oriented.

Hi Alana,

Thanks for your suggestions. I have already worked on expanding paragraphs that you pointed out.

Janis