Peer feedback :)

Peer feedback :)

Hi, great work so far! The points that stood out to me as i was reading through the wiki page were that the headlines really does cover the main points that needs to be explained under the topic of human bodies and the economy. Furthermore, the sub-titles are also very useful. Under Women’s Health, breast cancer and reproductive work were both included. These two paragraphs really act as back up supporting the overall idea of women’s health. The reference also seems to match the information displayed on the page. One concern is that some major important ideas may be missing. Examples of each real life occurrence prior to the issue should be included. Pictures and Videos will also make the biggest difference.

PhraewaLimviphuwat (talk)01:06, 24 March 2018