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Hi there,

Your topic was very interesting and I think you provided a lot of very useful information! However, I would suggest adding some media and maybe reformatting the headings and subheadings, it seemed as if there were too many topics (for example, under data and research) with very little information, would in my opinion made the flow of the page a bit "choppy". I was also interested to see how the "one child policy" would influence abortion in the country but I did not see any information about it. Here's a link to get you started: http://www.lifenews.com/2013/08/01/un-complaint-highlights-forced-abortion-and-gendercide-in-china/

BrookeLynch (talk)19:43, 7 December 2015