Gender Diagnosticity for the Homosexual Community

While I do think the importance of the bullying issue is worth discussing, I totally agree that we shouldn't go too much into detail, since it's already been explained earlier in the Future Research article.

And! I was trying to write about the internal/external interaction aspect, but couldn't find the words. I think you did a really good job of that, so yes, that would be an excellent point to include in the final write-up. More empirical support is always helpful, but the studies that CalvinChan have mentioned previously may also be sufficient if you want to stay within the realm of coping/stress.