page done?

page done?

Hi everyone,

So I added in the wiki information on how the questionnaire was decided as suggested by Dr. Veale. I also included the format the questions appear in the questionnaire and the number of questions that were in the final survey. This is added in as the third paragraph. If someone would like to read over it to check for grammar errors I missed or to make sure the tense is all the same (I used past tense in the third paragraph is this correct?) I also combined some of the first pargraph to the final paragraph as it was repeating itself with talking about the lack of communicating during editing of the survey. I think this page is done if I didnt over look any grammar errors! Let me know your thoughts.

I also in my third paragraph included a reference to (Gratton and Jones, 2003) I will put in final citations, this was due to information on the type of questions that we used regarding the format.

cheers

NicolaVanderliek (talk)21:12, 3 August 2013

I've fixed all of the grammar and spelling problems that I could find, and omitted some words so that things would sound smoother. As I said in the discussion for the "Survey" page, I think this page should focus more on just the development process of questions, so I think information from the third paragraph would be better suited to be in the "Survey" page.

SelenaZhao (talk)04:52, 4 August 2013

Yes I combined third paragraph in to this page and also looked over grammar! think this is good to go! I also mentioned this in the disucssion on previous method page.

NicolaVanderliek (talk)01:54, 5 August 2013