Masculinity and mortality

Masculinity and mortality

This section looks really good. I just made a few changes to the wording of the first paragraph - I hope that makes it a bit more clear.

JaimieVeale (talk)21:19, 1 August 2013

Thanks for making the changes Jaimie.

AmandaYuen (talk)16:48, 2 August 2013

I just changed it from "explred" to "explored." Hope thats ok

AmandaYuen (talk)16:52, 2 August 2013