Third Paragraph (BSRI)

In this paragraph describing the BSRI, the part "impossible to be high on one scale and low on another" I think could be explained further and put into a sentence of its own. (As it is, it seems too much to have in one sentence). Also when talking about the BSRI we should mention what the questions seem to be measuring - instrumentality and expressiveness. Finally, in the last sentence, are you talking about as romantic partners? Otherwise, the paragraph is shaping up nicely.

I've added a bit from another section here which may need a bit more work to describe the context.

Hi Jaimie, I included the items that you had brought from another section within the paragraph, I wasn't sure if you had intended for them to be separate or combined so I left them in both and I can keep whichever one works better.

I think they could be integrated into the paragraph. Thanks!