First paragraph
I must say I really like the first paragraph. I wonder if we could say something linking it to the second paragraph, because the change of subject seems a bit abrupt.
Hey Jaimie,
As I mentioned in the other thread, do you think it would be useful to move the definition of gender and sex into paragraph 1 of this thread because even the beginning of this paragraph seems a little abrupt by immediately talking about measuring gender without defining it.
Hi Gordon, I agree with you in that the change in subjects is abrupt. I think moving the definition of gender and sex into paragraph 1 is a great idea!
Thanks Jaimie and Charly, I've removed the "Gender" portion from "2.3" into "2.1" and am editing it as well as adding a bit more on the History.
Kind of got stuck on editing that first and second paragraph for a long time, but I think I've smoothed it out.