Writing Style Comments

1. Consistency Issues: Refrain from using '"/". In the second paragraph of Acoustics, writing 'mouthpiece/reed' and 'tone/sound' makes it unclear as to which you are referring to. 2. In general, be aware of run-on sentences. Specifically, watch out for sentences with 2-3 commas or more. For example, Acoustics paragraph 5 'If the pressure is too low....' 3. Acoustics paragraph 6: This paragraph needs some work to improve clarity. Correct grammatical issues and run-on sentences. 4. The last sentence is hard to read due to excessive use of commas and semicolon. If possible, separate this last sentence into two sentences for easier reading.