Peer Review

Peer Review

I thought this page was an interesting read!

Physics Content I felt like the physics content was explained really well. I felt as though when you were explaining the formants, maybe adding some more diagrams would be a good idea, just so the read has a better picture about the formants.

Clear Explanations I felt as though everything was explained with detail and very specific. Great Job! As a reader, it was easy to follow and understand concepts.

Structure and Length I felt as though the structure of the page was well-organized and length of the whole page is good. However, I feel that bolding your main headings would be a good idea. As well as having a title as the "Mouth" or something along those lines would be better for the reader to understand the page is about the mouth.

Writing Style The writing style was easily understandable and good. Felt like I was able to follow everything.

Diagrams and Photographs I believe having photos of the mouth with labels and diagrams about the physics, explaining the mouth are good. However, I feel the page is could have some more diagrams to make the page the more appealing for the reader to want to know more about what this page is about.

Overall this page was a good read!

CynthiaEmmanuel (talk)22:36, 26 March 2018