100-day Cough: The Human Body
Okay no problem Kiran! :) Thanks for getting back to me. I didn't delete that part, but I did take out one sentence from a different section because it was repeating a previous point (just different wording), and just merged the two together. I also changed two of the sub-titles from the "Disruption of physiological functions" section, as well as added a few more points. Feel free to take a look and tell me if you disagree with any of them.
I saved all the stuff that I have made edits to on another file. If you guys want to take a look, I can post it here.
One more thing, I added my sources to the reference section, but there's not enough space to fit everything in the circle and I don't know how to shrink it. Can someone help with this? Thanks!
Just went through the entire prezi - looks fantastic! Michael - the arrows are frieking awesome i like it haha :D and thank you Anna for leaving the sentences as is :)
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Hey everyone! Please check your internal message inbox on connect, because I just got my feedback and grade for my Individual Response section. Connect doesn't notify you when there's a message, so just wanted to let you guys know in case you didn't check your feedback already. This way, if there's any mistakes the profs picked up, we still have some time left before the deadline to make changes! :)
Updated changes: I've added the specific three toxins released by the bacteria, and also changed the title "Hijacks the Host Defense Mechanism" to "Impairment of Mucociliary System". I made the infection more specific as well. This is all in response to the feedback I got from my individual portion. Hope you guys see this in time!