Comments and Suggestion

Hi Talya,

I am actually quite fond of your topic as I always find myself being fascinated by the different procedures that people are opting for. I like your format but I would suggest using the wiki tools more effectively. For example, you can get rid of the definitions section and perhaps make use of external links and footnotes. That would make your page more polished. In terms of media incorporation, I think your page looks quite catchy. Coming down to content, I think it would have been more interesting if you had perhaps talked about how the mass media is influencing the want vs need to get plastic surgery. Since we live in the digital era, I think it would have been great to connect the two variables and make a valuable discussion out of that. Furthermore, I would also love to see a little bit more of an expansion on the social and economic implications and these surgeries as well as the extent to which people can go.