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Hi Talya,
I really like your topic, and I think you did an amazing job writing this page. I especially liked it that you provided links to youtube videos for more clarification. I've got some suggestions for you. I think it might be better if you omit the "definition" heading, and just try to define terms such as "medical consumerism" under the "Medical Consumerism: Cosmetic Surgery" heading. Another suggestion that I have is to use "Sub-heading 1" for "Who", "Why" and "Example" under the heading of "Female Cosmetic Surgery: Who and Why?". Finally, since we covered breast cancer in this course you could also include a section to address plastic surgery among breast cancer survivors.