Critiques and Suggestions

Hi Dandan,
It was an interesting subject, very well presented and described. Here are my suggestions:

1. A link’s format in the “Possible Solution” needs to be fixed.
2. I suggest you to apply a reference style in “References” section and refer to those last two abandoned papers in the body of page that help readers to understand what are their associations with what you explained across the page.
3. It would be great if you add your own evaluations of the two papers in a few sentences as Adnan already mentioned.
4. The page has a kind of instructing tone rather than descriptive. Personally, I would appreciate a more clear boundary between the materials adapted from each paper, although, the current structure is also expressive.

All above matters aside, it was a nice draft and I enjoyed reading it.

Good job,

Yaashaar