Critique

  • As May mentioned there are a couple of spelling errors
  • Some items such as Kalman filters could be linked
  • First person pronoun "we" doesn't sound appropriate for a wiki
  • Perhaps the equations are better on their own paragraph rather than in-line
  • Define the variables explicitly: T(X); r(t), x(t) (how are they broken down?); etc. for all the equations
  • Also, images
JulinSong (talk)22:53, 12 March 2018