Critque
Hi Junyuan,
First of all, let me apologize. I totally mixed up the due date of critiquing with the due date of Final Draft. Let me thank you for contributing in our Wiki pages, and what a fantastic job you have done. I have experience working with Prolog, Datalog, Haskell, and Scala, and one of my undergrad degrees was in pure math focusing on logic, so I might not be an average reader of the page (so if the easiness is hard for someone with less background I am not sure). For me this is the type of page I want to see as for our this assignment. Very to the point, sufficient and minimal. Just a few pointers: Do not leave the links to papers as "Link". Add some hyperlinks both to other pages and to phenomenons that can be looked for those who need a bit more in order to understand the whole thing. Also, the alignment of the DNA image is a bit off I think. thank you again!
Cheers,
Mehrdad Ghomi
Thank you for your feedback Mehrada! it's good for me to know expert's suggestion, I will add more link to other pages!
Sincerely,
Junyuan Zheng