Critique

Hi Adnan,

Excellent page! Well-written and organized.

General comments:

  • I would have liked to see more clearly what work corresponds to which papers; for example, is QLk the incremental contribution you intended to describe for the assignment, or is QCH?
  • It's good that the sources for the figures are given when I click on them; but it would be good to add citations directly in the page as well.

Section-specific comments:

  • Cognitive Hierarchy
    • F (j | j < m) should be enclosed in math tags, I think.
  • The Modified Model (QCH)
      • "The authors" - which authors?

Clear skies,
Jordon

JordonJohnson (talk)05:28, 11 March 2016

Hi Jordon, Thank you for your suggestions. I have added citations to the figures directly on the page and put in the missing math tags you pointed out. I've also explicitly stated the incremental contribution of Paper 1 over Paper 2 at the end of the page.

AdnanReza (talk)18:39, 13 March 2016