November Assignment Feedback
I think your article was overall well written. I liked how you explained the problems with support systems that utility assessments solved. I found some of the information in the first two paragraphs repetitive. I was also a little confused about how utility assessments get rid of the bias in AI support systems. Aren't these support systems trained on historical data still? So even with the utility assessment won't there still be bias. Also, you could add some more information about what kind of utility assessments could be used.
Thank you, Kate. I've made efforts to eliminate redundancy wherever identified.
Regarding the utility assessment approach, I'm leaning towards employing a VAS-based method.
In response to your feedback on bias, I've made updates to the article. Despite our reliance on historical data, continuous updates serve as a means of mitigating this concern in our particular case.