Critiquing Assignment - Junyuan Zheng
The page is great, easy to understand. But I think it would be better to reorganize the "Probabilities and Factors" parts, maybe introduce the example first, but doesn't give the solution, and then introduce the theory, how to calculate the , , and finally explain how to use the value or given number in the example to solve those problem, that would be easy for people to understand.
Thanks for the feedback! I get what you mean about the Probabilities and Factors section; but I'm not sure a full reorganization is necessary. I've put in links to make sure people know about the worked example, and I've added some text to more clearly motivate that the purpose of the math is to allow us to calculate probabilities; we'll see during the grading if those measures are adequate.