Critique
Fragment of a discussion from Course talk:CPSC522/IsAttentionExplanation
Hello Matthew!
Thank you so much for your excellent and comprehensive critique. Based on your suggestions, here are the changes that I made:
1) Removed the ML links from the "Builds On" section.
2) Edited the introduction to include the full citation.
3) Moved the text about v, W_1 and W_2 being parameters.
4) Provided a description (+ citation) for Kendall rank correlation in the first paragraph of Paper 1 -> Answering RQ1.
5) Trimmed down the "Datasets and Tasks" section by only including one sentence definitions for each dataset.
6) Edited the MIMIC example (it is now changed to Diabetes).
Once again, thank you for reviewing my page. Do let me know if you have any additional comments or suggestions.