Wednesday comments

Hi Cathryn,

Great job! I'm really liking the progression of your page. I appreciate the time you've put into researching each of these acts

Some thoughts: -Having "Privacy Laws in Canada" as one section with each of the acts as sub-sections; "Privacy Laws in United States" as another section w/ acts as sub-sections. It might help this section flow more smoothly versus the bolded sub- and sub-sub sections of both countries running into another (I found this to be the case for my page at least). -I think the inclusion of case studies is a great section -- it provides some appropriate examples of privacy issues for archives. -Because you mention East Germany, it might make sense to include a section (though perhaps not as detailed as Canada & US) for more examples of /links to Privacy legislation outside North America, rather than getting rid of the East Germany example altogether (which is an excellent example). -Maybe there are some cool photos of Stasi files that are available for upload? :)

Thanks for your comment Alison I really appreciate it. I will try and find some more information about privacy in Germany. I think your suggestion of having an international section is a great idea! I will take into consideration your suggestion of having seperate sections entitled "Privacy Laws in...", I'm a little concerned that it might sound a bit repetitive.