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Hey, Cathryn!

This is amazingly comprehensive. You did a lot of work on this, and you should be proud of yourself.

The one suggestion I have is relatively minor. I think you should get rid of the "Background" heading all together, and have definitions and history be your main sections. I know that would make Definitions a short section, but that's not necessarily a bad thing.

Good luck!

Rosie Bigelow (talk)18:35, 9 April 2015

Thank you for the suggestion Rosie, I will put into effect your suggestion.

CathrynCrocker (talk)22:54, 10 April 2015