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Hi Kelsey,

Page is looking good! I especially like the coloured map at the top.

This week's suggestions:

• under your "Representations of Indigenous Groups" headings, there is the possibility of making 2 or more subheadings, just to make it look less text heavy, for example a heading for "New Zealand Archives' Polynesian Society collection" or even "Caribbean colonies" or something of the sort would fit nicely as a subheading, to make the text more readable and to separate your specific examples into themes.

• I think your Technology and Digitization section towards the end is extremely important and relative, however, in some ways do you think it is less of a major point in your overall wiki (it is heading 4), and more of a subheading, say under challenges?/and or equal to challenges? (i could be wrong; just exploring this idea) . OR, under the digitization section, since you mention major themes like "digital archives initiatives", "limited technology" or "opposition to archival digitization" > perhaps these could be subheadings as well?

• You've got lots of great content and resources; I think the main thing for me as a reader is that I would like to have more subheadings to help me scan through the main points of your wiki more easily.

JT

Hi,

I was literally just thinking that I should maybe put more headings in, so I appreciate you suggesting that as well!

I think my rationale for the placement of the Technology section is that it goes in a semi-chronologial order for top-level headings. It's not perfect, but it's what made sense for me. I was sort of hesitant to put too much stuff under "Challenges" just because...well, there are quite a lot of challenges in this situation! I will try to put more subheadings in there too though, I agree it's getting sort of wordy.