Last Minute Suggestions

Last Minute Suggestions

Hi Kelsey,

This looks really great and thorough in the coverage of the topic. I particularly like your final organization of your wiki, it presents the information nicely.

A few last minute comments:

  • I recommend adding dates or time periods (for example 19th century) to your introduction so that readers know what to expect in your wiki.
  • Same with the beginning of the "Africa" section under "Representations of Indigenous Groups." You mention "at a time when the continent was not well known or understood," however don't clarify when this time period is exactly until the end.
  • In the "Caribbean" section under "Representations of Indigenous Groups," you have the sentence, "The Moyne Report of the British West Indies in the 1930s criticized the familial trends of West Indian people because of their high birth rates and frequency of illegitimate births." I recommend adding a citation here.
MorganClendenning (talk)15:50, 9 April 2015