Overview/Intro?

Overview/Intro?

Hi Adena,

Your page is very thorough, I liked the section on using personal archives to increase the diversity of collections. You go into Feminist issues there quite a bit, were you planning on going further with issues like ethnic or social class diversity as well?

My main suggestion for you though is that I think an overview section at the top would be helpful. Your "definition" section could pretty much be switched to be an overview and intro at the very beginning, and your first section could just go into more detail about what makes personal archives distinct.

KelseyPoloney (talk)03:42, 4 April 2015

Hi Kelsey,

I'm definitely planning to include an overview/intro section (should probably get on that...)

I'm planning to do a bit more on the ethnic/class diversity but a lot of what I've found about it is not focused on personal archives specifically and has tended to overlap with what other classmates have written on their wiki pages. So I think I'm going to provide more linking and general commments than specific details (unless I find an amazing personal archives social class case study paper in the next week). It's a good point though and does need fleshing out!

Thanks for your feedback!

AdenaBrons (talk)18:14, 4 April 2015