Some suggestions

Some suggestions

Hi Kathryn, Great work! I just have a few small suggestions...

-You may want o spell out "United Kingdom" and "United States" when they are part of a section title (rather than UK or US).

-In the section on LAC, it could be beneficial to introduce the quote you use from their website. Something like "According to its website..." or "As described on its website..."

-In the UK National Archives section, it looks like there needs to be some extra spaces between paragraphs toward the end (even though some of the "paragraphs" are one 1 or 2 sentences)

-Some images would be nice if you could find some

Katie

KathrynFerrante (talk)19:33, 8 April 2013