Comments on the initial darft

Hi Katie,

I agree with Chelsea! Now that I am trying to tackle the surmountable task of including everything I can about the Archives of Ontario, I have come to realize that broader does not equal better. I recommend incorporating a small paragraph about Canada and remained focused on the U.S. There is a lot to cover there as it is.

Thanks Lisa and Chelsea! I have been leaning toward, as Lisa suggested, including a section on Canada, but not going into as much depth within in as I will for the US.