Feedback

Hey Eric!

This is definitely a solid start. It's very thematic, and I like how tight the content is so far.

I suppose I don't have feedback for you as much as I have questions. I don't know the source material as well as you do, so you may have a better idea than me. Is the development of Late Modern Archives in North America mostly centered around thought? If it is, fine, but you may want to be clearer about that in the wiki. Even just a sentence to that effect may work to your benefit. It may just be me, but for some reason I was waiting for a bigger trend to follow?

Good start, man!

Rosie Bigelow (talk)06:21, 31 March 2015

Hello again!

This is an amazing improvement from last time, and I really only have one comment. I noticed that, in the United States section, you wrote that it "seems" archival theory is from Schellenberg. I'd suggest watching out for words like "seems" and similar. A wiki is supposed to be a presentation of facts, and what theory says. There is no room for "seems" when facts are involved!

Good luck!

Rosie Bigelow (talk)02:31, 9 April 2015