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Hi Eric, Great work so far on a topic with such breadth. Great organization and I like the link to the related wiki page. You may have just not gotten to this stage yet but hyperlinking could enhance your wiki. A few small grammatical things which I'm sure you'll catch in the editing phase: you have capitalized Bureaucratic several times and I am pretty sure it doesn't need to be capitalized. In terms of content, I would consider maybe expanding on the "Challenges" section to include a few more discussion points. I would also try and to expand a bit on the "Influences" section in both the U.S and Canada subsections. Do already do a good job at summarizing the overall developments but adding in a bit more info on the key figures and events in each country (if possible) might be beneficial.

Hi Eric, I like how your page has come along and how you've added in hyperlinks. Adding in few more pictures would further balance out the text in my opinion. Your overview is nicely written and succinct and I also like how you've added in a discussion of the total archives concept in Canada. Looking forward to reading the final product