minor grammatical suggestion

minor grammatical suggestion

Hi Rosie,

Great job on your page. I noticed a minor grammatical error in your introduction. On the second sentence I would suggest you take out the word "can" and adding an "s"to refer. And you may want to take out the word "will". Overall the structure is well organized. Good job!

CathrynCrocker (talk)23:08, 10 April 2015