Introduction

Introduction

Hi Rosie,

Really great wiki so far! Just a couple of minor things I noted. In your introduction, I recommend adding in the word "business" into the first sentence so it reads "When speaking about business and corporate archives..." This way it matches your wiki title and eliminates readers getting confused from the start. Also, I was recently informed that the wiki title should be bolded within that first sentence in order to follow wiki formatting rules. So, bold "business and corporate archives" in the first sentence.

Also within the introduction, your last sentence in the first paragraph ("Sometimes the archives in general needs to pull double duty and be both, and sometimes the Records Management and Archives are completely separate from each other.") is a little confusing. Perhaps do some rewording here and be sure to be consistent if using capitalization. I think the first "archives" is the same as the second "Archives," correct? I recommend making this more apparent.

MorganClendenning (talk)07:23, 8 April 2015