Discussion

Hi Rosie,

looks really promising and I like the breadth of your coverage, especially the "outreach" section. There are a couple of spelling and grammar things, but I don't think it's fair for me to comment on that at this stage of the wiki. I know it's a broad topic as it is, but I kind of like Allison's suggestion to look at archives outside of NA. And to piggyback Allison again, you have good and really interesting discussion points and it would be great to get an idea of these in your overview, as I didn't get that at first blush. Looking good and I can't wait to see more of this wiki as you develop it.

Best,

Victor

Thanks for the feedback!

I'll be sure to expand the overview to include all of the talking points. You're right, that should be more comprehensive.

Hi Ms. B and fellow poddy,

I think you mentioned in class how vulnerable one can feel to expose your writing in its various draft forms and stages - and I of all people appreciate that, being a bipolar writer with a complete disregard for basic grammatical rules and spelling conventions - so when I say that your wiki has come a long way I mean it in the sense that you have addressed all of the various comments on your Wiki in such a impressively exact and flawless manner. Not that you should tailor your writing to others wholeheartedly, but you have managed to take into account what the people have said, while still remaining true to your voice, which . I think your overview is fantastic - and not necessarily because you made the changes I suggested : ) - although, just as a matter of personal taste, I think you could do without the last sentence: "These issues are exacerbated by the fact that most corporate archives are in the control of Fortune 500 companies," since it takes a way from the wonderful general Wiki tone your overview has. I like that you are specific about the region you are covering, and it reminds me that I need to do that for my Wiki as well. As a final point, and I am probably stating the obvious and what others may have already said, but would be great to see some media, especially a video (admittedly, I'm a visual learner), on your Wiki page.

All in all, very proud to have you part of my/our pod, one that I believe is filled with five of the "best" Wikis in our class.

Take care,

V