General thoughts

In Formation and Early Years, maybe say where/what Connaught Library is (or provide a link). I would also suggest expanding the section on Emily Carr at the end. Overall, consider expanding on the collection/holdings. There is a bit of information here and there in different sections but after reading it, I didn't feel like I had a good idea of what was acquired/contained in the archives (other than the three significant holdings at the end)

Ideas for links: Document Disposal Act (I see it's later in the document but it's introduced earlier), Emily Carr, Royal BC Museum (at its introduction),

I like that you have the video embedded! (Haven't watched it yet but I will) and the section on legislation is quite strong.

Thanks for the suggestions, Adena. I found another resource for the formation/early years section, by Eastwood, so will hopefully be able to get across the types of materials that were collected at that time. And, more linking!

I honestly read through this again trying to think of more feedback and had a really hard time. It looks fantastic! The only small thing I can think of is you might consider including a small section on FOIPPA in your legislature and governance section if you think it relevant enough.

Thanks for giving it some more thought! I'm just struggling to finish up some other assignments, but if I get time before the tenth I will absolutely look at doing this. A paragraph or so would be a good addition.