sentence edit

sentence edit

Hi Lisa,

I was just reading through your wiki and wanted to mention a small potential edit. Under the Legislation section you have written:

"The public retains the right to access any public record of archival value and any private record of archival value, or copy of the record, that is in the custody and control of the archives; however, public access to public and private records may be subject to any restrictions imposed by law, and/or private records may be subject to any restrictions imposed by agreement upon acquisition." (this corresponds with footnote 5).

I was wondering if it would be possible to break this sentence into two sentences - it's really long.

Overall, great work and all the best for finishing it up... whilst in Ontario! :)

Chelsea

ChelseaBailey (talk)06:03, 9 April 2013

Thanks Chelsea! Now that my conference is over I plan on tweaking quite a bit of my wiki. I will add this to the list!

LisaUyeda (talk)06:25, 9 April 2013