Sentences and edits

Hi Lisa,

Great work thus far!

I was reading through your wiki and found some sentences that could be referenced or rephrased.

History and development section: "The rich history of the Archives of Ontario began in 1903 and marks the appointment of Alexander Fraser as the Archivist for the Province of Ontario by Premier George Ross and the Government of Ontario" - could this sentence be referenced to a source?

Provincial Archives section: "Prior to 1986, finding aids and control documentation were an intimidating hotchpotch of things that seemed like a good idea at the time." - perhaps this could be reworded so it is a bit more formal, without becoming too scholarly?

Sometimes your wiki has sentences that say "the Archives of Ontario" and at other times "the archives' of Ontario". Perhaps this could become more standardized?

Chelsea