Thoughts/Comments

Thoughts/Comments

Hey Christie,

This looks very thorough. I did have a suggestion for clarity though. I was thinking you might want to include a parenthetical after you first use the terms Hudson Bay Company and Hudson Bay Company Archives. For instance: "Hudson's Bay Company (HBC)" and "Hudson's Bay Company Archives (HBCA)". Because you use their acronyms throughout your wiki, and although you could argue someone should be able to figure it out by context, its probably best to include it. You have already done this with your section on the Truth and Reconciliation Commission.

Just as a comment, I want to say that you seem to really have taken to this style of writing quite naturally. Or, if it didn't come naturally, it seems as if you have been able to transition nicely. Good job!

In your section on "The National Research Centre for Truth and Reconciliation," I wondered if you had thought about using hyperlinked words in order to remove the rather unsightly parentheticals with website information. Just a thought.

It is looking good!

Jason Martin (talk)07:14, 30 March 2015

Thanks for the input about the acronyms... I totally forgot to do that!

ChristineWaltham (talk)19:44, 30 March 2015