Layout suggestion
Hi Christie, I really like the way your page is turning out! Like Syla mentioned, ambitious to take on the whole province, but I think you successfully convey an interesting breadth of information in a succinct manner.
A layout suggestion: sub-section 1.2 is divided into three sub-sub-sections…but given the amount of information about government records and private records, the whole 'Holdings' sub-section sort of ends up just reading as a vehicle for the HBC archives. Could the important info on government and private records get moved into the introduction, 'Holdings' gets retitled 'Prominent holdings', and HBC gets given it's own section altogether? The content is great, nothing needs to be added or subtracted. Maybe just shuffled about. In my mind this might help your page read a little tidier but it's up to you, of course!