General thoughts

I like the layout/organization of your page now - I definitely think it reads easier. One nitpicky thing: in most of your headings you says Type of Archives: Example (Provincial Archives- the Archives of Manitoba etc.) However you don't follow this format for University Archives, presumably because you talk about more than one example. I would probably suggest just making your headings Provincial/Municipal/University etc. Archives and leaving off the specific names. However, you want to do it though, just check the consistency.

Otherwise your page looks great!

I'm glad to hear it makes more sense now! Thanks for pointing out my heading consistency issues, I'll get along to fixing them soon!