minor edits

minor edits

Hey Chelsea, Your wiki so far is amazing - lots of great information presented in a logical way.

I don't have any major suggestions, but I noticed a few minor things that could be edited: under "Value of Archives in War", second sentence should contain commas -- "Archives, and the records they contain, provide invaluable information..." same section: "Archives may be destroyed through artillery combat and aerial bombardment due to their location in war zones" could be read as saying that archives are always located in war zones. It's obvious that you don't mean this, but you may want to re-word: "Archives in war zones may be destroyed..."

It might be helpful to define cultural internationalism vs cultural nationalism a bit earlier. I know I was hoping for a definition when you first mentioned those; they're pretty big terms!

Section on nationalism vs internationalism "International legislation - such as that of 1899, 1907, and 1954 - are often premised on..." Should say "...is often premised on..."

AlexandraWieland (talk)02:19, 10 April 2013

Thank you so much for catching these mistakes, Alexandra! I'll be sure to fix them.

Thanks again, Chelsea

ChelseaBailey (talk)03:25, 10 April 2013