some suggestions

some suggestions

Hi Evan,

I think this echoes some of the comments others have posted, but it would be helpful to provide a bit more of an introduction before diving into Derrida. Also, if you are going to bring up the concept of phenomenology, it would be helpful to provide a brief explanation of the term (if that's possible!). Finally, you bring up Foucault within the section Derrida's Framework. It seems like this portion should either exist as its own section, or the title of the section should be change to reflect your inclusion of both theorists.

Good start overall though! I don't envy your task of putting Derrida into wiki language.

Katie

KathrynFerrante (talk)21:17, 9 April 2013