suggestions

Hi again fellow pod member,

I am especially looking forward to reading the section "Destruction and (Re)construction of Archives" as well as the case studies you have outlined.

A few suggestions:

I think hyperlinking "Raphael Lemkin" to the Wikipedia page on him would be helpful for the reader. Also in that same sentence if that will be the first time you reference the Holocaust, you should hyperlink it as well.

When you refer to a writer in your text, such as Dawne Adam in the "Khmer Rouge" section, it is helpful for the general reader if you qualify their name, i.e. "archivist Dawne Adam."

You might want to move the sentence "The above lists are not comprehensive..." from the end of the lists of genocidal events to above the lists before the sentence "The following list includes..." (and obviously change "above" to "following"). This way the reader is informed immediately that the lists are partial, and the sentence does not float down at the bottom of the section.

All the best.

Hi again,

Thanks for the suggestions! All of them are great - I will update my page tomorrow.