minor spelling change

minor spelling change

Great job Marissa!

This is a wonderfully written and thought-provoking page. I only have one suggestion, in your introductory paragraph changing enact to enacted. Otherwise, great job!

CathrynCrocker (talk)23:35, 10 April 2015

Hi Cathryn,

Thank you! I reread the sentence and I think I'm going to keep it as 'enact' because I think it fits in the context ("...tool through which perpetrators enact violence…") - changing it would mean that I'd have to change the tense of the entire sentence, I think? Please correct me (again) if I'm wrong/you disagree!

Thanks again :)

MarisaParker (talk)00:15, 11 April 2015

I re-read your sentence, I think it sounds fine. I think I had a bit of a brain fart when I first read it.

CathrynCrocker (talk)01:37, 11 April 2015